Aeve the first episode complete- watch please secrets of women in the bible.

[Anchorite]

Thank you anchorite, whoever you are. Your opinion is nice I have 30 people who differ and the most important thing they like. I have more 200,000 views in other channles and the most important thing people who have seen my cartoon of David and Aeve have done what they done and have gone back to talk to thier family look for the important things in life. Too bad anchorite you don't like many people do like that I talked and many women like the cartoon talking about women things and important christian things. the family promblem to solve the promblems to convert and special things be thankful in the cartoon that what's in is important.

So cartoon making people go do things like david is important. Even if it is hard. I apologzie if offended anyone. Your not God anchorite your a simple man that does not know the whole thing please watch majority of cartoons don't judge things fast.

I did not make a big deal out of how I do not like your cartoon. I did not insult you personally.

Perhaps you are young. It is easy to be self-impressed. I was for decades. Critique is always better than praise. Critique humbles us and helps us develop. Praise can make us smug and blind to our faults.

Your intention seems good. I hope you get better at what you are trying to do.

Having a real female do the female cartoon voice would help.

 

[grumix8]

You have insulted me and unlike other people I know what you mean. I have criticized you Anchorite and you did not like you, you do not support pressure really. I see you like my intention and after reading this I have realized you have not seen the whole thing. please watch the whole thing and do not be quick to judge. This cartoon has all the majority of verses that include the bible about women and tells us the key and important ones God has given women. A very good thing and shows all real life promblems and people who have stated their lives christian women face and normal women face in life. And the most important sermons pastors talk abotu salvation and hard things christians go thru it has real life promblems they have faced and sermons that talk to solve them and they use also God's help in use of them.

God gave many sermons the most powerful and true and they are in the cartoon, this is not to please the world this is to do the thing God want's us to do and do his will if your women and also men have to do their part. It is important. I don't come here to serve people I came here to serve God. Not the acceptance of people.

 

[Anchorite]

You have insulted me and unlike other people I know what you mean. I have criticized you Anchorite and you did not like you, you do not support pressure really. I see you like my intention and after reading this I have realized you have not seen the whole thing. please watch the whole thing and do not be quick to judge.

I am sorry but I cannot bear to watch the whole thing.

Wynona gave a critique that I agree with.

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I watched about ten minutes. It's honestly cringeworthy in the execution.

The background music is hard to take in, the "female voice" is so clearly a male voice trying to sound feminine that it seems like it's mocking women, which is not the message of the video.

The male speakers voice is hard to hear. Im not sure the hideous 3D animation is a good vehicle to get your ideas across. I don't think its a lack of effort. No matter how much work you put into that type of animation, it would still turn out hideous.

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[grumix8]

You are wrong, your judging things incorrectly. God bless Wynona, unfortunateley good Anchorite you wish to make things simple and fast. I will tell ya that you have no patience to see the end of series shows you quick judgement and easy response. I will ask you nicely to be patient because the series has done good effect and thank you for your response like someone wise said. If you can't say good things don't say anything bad thank you. Be in thanks and gratitude what the Lord gives.

 

[Anchorite]

You are wrong, your judging things incorrectly. God bless Wynona, unfortunateley good Anchorite you wish to make things simple and fast. I will tell ya that you have no patience to see the end of series shows you quick judgement and easy response. I will ask you nicely to be patient because the series has done good effect and thank you for your response like someone wise said. If you can't say good things don't say anything bad thank you. Be in thanks and gratitude what the Lord gives.

Since you are too prideful and self-impressed to consider any critique, you may not ever improve. You will just keep grinding out poor productions and feel good about it. This is not the way to succeed.