How can anyone give critique on your document seeing you have scarcely started with it, what, haven't finished with it yet? The columns you supplied do not reach up to Palm Sunday yet?
Just looked up the link to my PDF files, and it is what I had previously put up on the forum as an attachment within the context of a discussion around the Easter period..
Now concerning your comments that I have not presented the event of Jesus riding into Jerusalem on a cult, you have missed the point and fact that the adoration of the crowd happened during the twilight after the Sabbath day had ended at sunset. So if you had gone back to page 7 you would have seen the account of what we call Palm Sunday happening on or during what we would call Saturday evening's twilight period.
The document is over 90 pages long and begins with Jesus entering into Jericho and covers the time up and until Jesus' assent up to heaven.
You are welcome to provide a critique of that Document if you want to as it would be good for someone with biblical knowledge and the Jewish cultural understanding to highlight any possible corrections that need to be made.
Shalom